Thursday, 5 February 2009

Stay

Yeah, I know I only posted earlier today, but in celebration of my first day as a blogger :) I wanted to put something up here...

If you read it, please comment and let me know what you think...

I'm dead nervous now :S


Here it is:

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Stay

(Verse)
I’m bored, you say, as you stare into space
Nowhere to look so I look at your face
A smile, a joke, but it’s just not enough
Taking my effort and crushing to dust

(Chorus)
How do you feel, when you tell me it’s not real?
How do you know, that I don’t care if you go?
Why do you say, that you’ll always be okay?
Why go away?

Stay

(Verse)
I love you, you say, but it don’t mean anything
It cuts me deep ‘cause you mean everything
You’re taking me hostage, tying me down
Can’t keep up, I’m gonna drown

(Bridge)
Your touch makes it better, in snow and in rain
Your kiss stops my suffering and heals my pain

(Chorus)

(Instrumental)

(Outro)
I’ve felt your pain
I’ve taken it to heart
And now I know
It’s time for a fresh start
What do you care?
What do you know?
‘Cause I can’t stay

…It’s time for me to go


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It's only really the first draft, sort of, but I hope you like it. :)

NB
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5 comments:

  1. Laura Marie5 February 2009 at 04:12

    I CARE!!! ..... nathan this is incredible...is it written about anyone? or is it...pulled from nowhere lol...

    you should be so proud of your self darling... :)

    <3

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  2. Nathan5 February 2009 at 04:14

    It's about no-one in particular... but I think all of it is how I've felt at some time or another...
    It's pulled from the murky depths of my imagination :P

    Thank you :)
    x

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  3. Nutty Gnome5 February 2009 at 06:11

    Nathan, your song is wonderful - I hope you get your band off the ground because I'd really love to hear you sing this.
    Liz ( Laura's mum!)

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  4. Mystery5 February 2009 at 07:47

    Now all you have to do is put the music to the song and have fun while it's becoming a hit!

    Keep doing whatever it is you enjoy and success will follow you wherever you go.

    ~Breeze

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  5. Laura Marie6 February 2009 at 14:59

    Oi!! mess?!!! .... im sorry that my life is not as perfect as yours...mr...err...perfect...

    And i dont ignore your advice all the time...just some of it....and even then i dont feel happy about it :P :P

    <3

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